Garrulous Glaahk SamSniped Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 I was inspired by Sharx(Drakon Sssharxx)'s thread,A Geneforge story.I might as well make one,you know. But first I need 3 more characters. Please just put a name and description down for your character,first three get in the story! #1-Orion Des'Xoas His father was one of the people sent to explore Valorim,but died while killing Rentar-Ihrno.Orion is a natural born warrior with some magic and summoning skills and is a marksman with a bow and arrow. #2- #3- #4- -=##2112##=- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Tarson Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 So your first charater Explored valorim got exiled and then died in the attack on rentars first fortress in avernum? That would put him at about 250 years old when he died. In a3 The mayor of krizan says valorim was settled about 200 years before. Exploring it would have been 10 years (given all the Killing of nephil that happend) preivous. A4 was 20 years after that. I like the idea of a story but I cant really come up with a charater without knowing a time frame to put him in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyshakk Koan Velzan Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 @RC You spelled Irhno Wrong. Also is he undead ? That could explain age. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Tarson Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 How would he have reached 250 to get to killed in the attack at all? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hatchling Cockatrice Alorael at Large Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 "Sent to explore Valorim" could easily mean a member of Unspecified Services or Covert Ops who got sent up during the plagues. The time between A3 and A4 is quite reasonable for a single warrior's career, I believe. —Alorael, who sincerely hopes that Orion Sr. was not outfitted with the Xian gear that was inherited by his son. That would require too much Xian explanation for the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyshakk Koan Velzan Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 Mage. As the case of Solberg where magic extends life. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Understated Ur-Drakon Earth Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 Originally Posted By: Velzan Mage. As the case of Solberg where magic extends life. yeah and look what it has done to him, he is basically paranoid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Tarson Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 Quote: It also sped up his body's age causing severe arthritis. As the administrator of Patrick's Tower, Solberg was basically useless (as a Arch-Mage). Solberg isnt 250 and he cant do much magic anymore. How would someone, even if they had erika's skill, be useful and alive at 250? The names of the people who went up during the valorim plauges are Erin, Elsner, Gwost, Tucker and the pc heros from a3. Everyone else that went up (other then a spy In one of the major citys) snuck up, as the second group was the last one because of people who wanted to stay safe from what the empire might do rather then explore was what rushed the second group into going early. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hatchling Cockatrice Randomizer Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 Sandra, Kalgan, Kalgan's unnamed parter, and Dwaine were also sent up to the Sharamik and Lorelei region. Solberg has good reason to be paranoid after all that time hiding out in the lava fields southwest of Formello to hide from demons. He knows they are out to get him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hatchling Cockatrice Alorael at Large Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 I believe RC's implication is that Orion's father was one of the A3 PCs, and given his role in Rentar's death he was probably one of the A4 PCs as well. —Alorael, who is fine with that as a background detail for a story as long as the story is good. If the story isn't good then small liberties with blanks in canon don't matter anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hatchling Cockatrice Lilith Posted July 24, 2009 Share Posted July 24, 2009 Originally Posted By: Velzan @RC You spelled Irhno Wrong. So did you: it's Ihrno. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk SamSniped Posted July 25, 2009 Author Share Posted July 25, 2009 Originally Posted By: Eras of Radiance! I believe RC's implication is that Orion's father was one of the A3 PCs, and given his role in Rentar's death he was probably one of the A4 PCs as well. —Alorael, who is fine with that as a background detail for a story as long as the story is good. If the story isn't good then small liberties with blanks in canon don't matter anyway. Orion's father was in A3,and the story is around A4,one year after whatever happened in it at the end. And no,Orion has nothing to do with Xian items. In fact,his armor is blessed platemail,not Xian chainmail. P.S.-Didn't Rentar die in A3?I always thought he did. P.S.S.-Very Off-Topic,but anyone know what happened to Delicious Vilsh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Well-Actually War Trall Chessrook44 Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 Wait a second, so you're writing a story that takes place one year after a the end of a game you've never played? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rotghroth Rhapsody Ouroboros Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 Quote: P.S.-Didn't Rentar die in A3?I always thought he did. Rentar is a female and no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyshakk Koan Velzan Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 This thread has lost its point Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Lord Iraelithe Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 Make me a lord. Lol, I WILL BE LORD IRAELITHE! MWAHAHAHAHA...I mean...Yay! O_O No one heard that I hope... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Tarson Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 Originally Posted By: RC2112 P.S.-Didn't Rentar die in A3?I always thought he did. P.S.S.-Very Off-Topic,but anyone know what happened to Delicious Vilsh? Click to reveal.. Rentar teleports away after you destroy her machinery. She comes back in a4 and there she is killed after transforming herself into a crystal soul. What do you mean what happend to dv?He is a Member thats been around since before I was and was a mod for awhile as well. As far as I know he still logs on every so often. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Lord Iraelithe Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 Yeah, I've seen Vlish log on every once in a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Understated Ur-Drakon Earth Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 Originally Posted By: Randomizer Solberg has good reason to be paranoid after all that time hiding out in the lava fields southwest of Formello to hide from demons. He knows they are out to get him. True that but his Golems won't much help against Demons if they (those?) decide that they (those?) want Sol's head. That would be nice at A6 (or BoA mod), save Solberg and Tranquility from Demons invasion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk SamSniped Posted July 26, 2009 Author Share Posted July 26, 2009 Originally Posted By: Chessrook44 Wait a second, so you're writing a story that takes place one year after a the end of a game you've never played? -.- I read all of the stuff you people post about it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Tarson Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 Its a simple 5 step process. step 1: Get The first avernum trilogy step 2: win the first avernum trilogy step 3: Get the second trilogy step 4: win the second trilogy step 5: use info Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hatchling Cockatrice Alorael at Large Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 Originally Posted By: RC2112 I read all of the stuff you people post about it... Considering that you got both the gender and the death of Rentar-Ihrno wrong, you might want to read a little bit more before writing. —Alorael, who recommends Tarson's five step program. It will result in a much better understanding of Avernum, and you also get to play fun games. Win-win! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk SamSniped Posted July 26, 2009 Author Share Posted July 26, 2009 Originally Posted By: 13 Metageitnion E —Alorael, who recommends Tarson's five step program. It will result in a much better understanding of Avernum, and you also get to play fun games. Win-win! Point,my good friend. Step one-Get AV 1 and 2 #2-Finish AV 1 & 2 #3-Get AV 4 #4-finish AV 4 I never could kill Rentar in A3...I never got to it yet... DIE,ALIEN BEASTS,DIE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Tarson Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 What about A3,5,6 and the ee? All of those are very usefull info Steps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk SamSniped Posted July 26, 2009 Author Share Posted July 26, 2009 I have almost finished A3,and A5 and 6 are no real matter since this is the period BETWEEN A4 and A5. BTW,until i finish (said games),the first person to say me gets to take over the topic.They HAVE to use my character as at least a minor character,whether good or evil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Understated Ur-Drakon The Almighty Doer of Stuff Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 me Orion Des'Xoas says, "I hate my life! I want to DIE!" He then takes a knife and slits his own throat. THE END Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hatchling Cockatrice Randomizer Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 Review - Short, but to the point. This story is really on the cutting edge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hatchling Cockatrice Alorael at Large Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 Taking over a story usually involves a story that has already begun. This might be better termed ghostwriting. Very visible ghostwriting. —Alorael, who is reminded of the funniest joke he ever heard. Yes, he'd be happy to tell it. You start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnificent Ornk Dikiyoba Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 So Ahonar, Pathass, and Adze-Haakai walk into a bar... There. Dikiyoba started it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Untamed Banana Slug Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 Originally Posted By: Dikiyoba So Ahonar, Pathass, and Adze-Haakai walk into a bar... and Ahonar said "OUCH!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Well-Actually War Trall Chessrook44 Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 Originally Posted By: Untamed Banana Slug Originally Posted By: Dikiyoba So Ahonar, Pathass, and Adze-Haakai walk into a bar... and Ahonar said "OUCH!" Pathass then asked Adze-Haakai, "Why did Ahonar walk into a building?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyshakk Koan Drakon Sssharxx Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 Adze replies "to get to the other side." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hatchling Cockatrice Randomizer Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 Pathass shrugs. "Silly thin skins." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Dintiradan Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 Originally Posted By: The Almighty Doer of Stuff me Orion Des'Xoas says, "I hate my life! I want to DIE!" He then takes a knife and slits his own throat. THE END Derailing RP or RP-like threads before they start isn't very polite. If, for some reason, you simply must derail a RP or RP-like thread, you should probably derail it a different way each time, for variety's sake. :-P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Understated Ur-Drakon Earth Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 Originally Posted By: Randomizer Pathass shrugs. "Silly thin skins." and then Adze-Haakai gets enuf about companions and humans and sets whole town on fire. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk SamSniped Posted July 28, 2009 Author Share Posted July 28, 2009 What have I done? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Understated Ur-Drakon Earth Posted July 28, 2009 Share Posted July 28, 2009 Originally Posted By: RC2112 What have I done? nothing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Lord Iraelithe Posted July 28, 2009 Share Posted July 28, 2009 Originally Posted By: Earth2025 Originally Posted By: RC2112 What have I done? nothing. WRONG! What he has done is disrupt the chain of adding to the joke, AS HAVE YOU! >.< ......Sorry....Someone start a new joke? =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Understated Ur-Drakon Callie Posted July 28, 2009 Share Posted July 28, 2009 What's "<.>" supposed to mean anyway? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk SamSniped Posted July 28, 2009 Author Share Posted July 28, 2009 it's a disapproving look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hatchling Cockatrice Alorael at Large Posted July 29, 2009 Share Posted July 29, 2009 I have a new joke, but it's not funny. —Alorael, who would apologize for it if his apology were not also funny. Oh well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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