Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted March 15, 2012 Author Share Posted March 15, 2012 I'm happy that you like it. The Sentinels has received an update: http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/entries/show/13105071-the-sentinels Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted March 28, 2012 Author Share Posted March 28, 2012 The Spirited City was modified, look out for some special treats: http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt MMXPERT-seraph of thermodynamics Posted March 28, 2012 Share Posted March 28, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tenderfoot Thahd wgerard Posted April 3, 2012 Share Posted April 3, 2012 I took the time to read it and I have to admit: I like the story. I think it's interesting and exciting! Please don't stop writing I think your skills are very good. Sometimes I wonder if a flower delivers to sheffield is a good idea, but now I think: yes it is It is a good idea indeed. Do you have your texts also in a download available somewhere? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted April 12, 2012 Author Share Posted April 12, 2012 I'm afraid that the stone and the Hammer are only place you can find the text. However I can send you proto-versions of it through media fire if you really want. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unflappable Drayk Death Knight Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 Hey upon mars, you definitely spent a lot of time writing that story. You should post it here Fanfiction G Forge where a lot of other people post fanfiction for Geneforge series. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted April 24, 2012 Author Share Posted April 24, 2012 Thanks mate! I'll consider the offer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted April 25, 2012 Author Share Posted April 25, 2012 Next week I'll continue writing about Goettsch and start writing about the Bandit woods of which I'll post a sample this week end. PS: Sorry for the -double Post- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unflappable Drayk Death Knight Posted April 27, 2012 Share Posted April 27, 2012 Well its official, you got me going. Im contemplating writing about my recent warrior that im playing in g4 which is awesome. This writing will be much less diabolic than the one i wrote before with shaila and more about rebels. After reading that ive got no choice. Thanks for inspiring me to write again! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted April 30, 2012 Author Share Posted April 30, 2012 No problem. I'm happy you were inspired. Here's a treat for the eye and a work in progress: http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/entries/show/14593003-the-eagle Goettsch is going to follow soon after that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted May 6, 2012 Author Share Posted May 6, 2012 Texts have been updated, such as Chapter 3: Brennt, Chapter 4: the eagle part one, The Hill of Jars, Kazg part one and the sentinels: http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/show/14772571-brennt http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/show/14593003-the-eagle-part-1 http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/show/12871946-the-hills-of-jars http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/show/12872013-kazg-part-i http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/show/13105071-the-sentinels I have also started working on Goettsch: http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/show/14768212-goettsch Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted May 6, 2012 Author Share Posted May 6, 2012 Chapter 2 is updated: http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/entries/show/14772571-brennt Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted May 12, 2012 Author Share Posted May 12, 2012 The world of the shapers, the Spirited city and Goettsch have been edited; http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/show/14797305-the-world-of-the-shapers http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/show/13105051-the-spirited-city http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/entries/show/14768212-goettsch and the eagle part 1 and 2 are being completed and updated bit by bit... http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/show/14593003-the-eagle-part-1 http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/show/14771751-the-eagle-part-2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted May 19, 2012 Author Share Posted May 19, 2012 I started working on Masha and here's the beginning of it: "Every second is a make believe myth that there is an ultimate answer to one's libido." -Fabrice Luchini http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/show/12891748-masha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted May 21, 2012 Author Share Posted May 21, 2012 Working really hard and managed to build a little surprise for everyone; you know how spiderweb games have sorely needed some publicity over the years? Well it's not much but I hope you'll like it: http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/ http://polandpact.deviantart.com/gallery/26258413#/d2wlkbb Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted May 29, 2012 Author Share Posted May 29, 2012 Two drafts have been released: http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/entries/show/15563630-the-road http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/entries/show/14798012-the-great-labs Good reading! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted May 29, 2012 Author Share Posted May 29, 2012 And the home page has been updated: http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted May 29, 2012 Share Posted May 29, 2012 *snorts* I am jealous. This is getting you so many posts. I mean, your actually posting after yourself everytime, and no one tells you off xD If I could do this, that would be gold. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnificent Ornk Dikiyoba Posted May 29, 2012 Share Posted May 29, 2012 Originally Posted By: Trenton I am jealous. This is getting you so many posts. I mean, your actually posting after yourself everytime, and no one tells you off xD If I could do this, that would be gold. You have MMXPERT's game to make your post count go up faster than entirely reasonable. Don't complain. Upon Mars, when you are making multiple updates/releases close together (as in, less than several hours apart), please put them all in one post instead of making multiple posts in a row. That's standard netiquette for these forums. Thanks. Dikiyoba is so not complaining about post counts, mind you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted May 29, 2012 Share Posted May 29, 2012 Fine >.> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unflappable Drayk adc. Posted May 29, 2012 Share Posted May 29, 2012 Well yeah, of course, stories are seriously hard to make. Like thinking everytime what to add and predict the next part with the relation to the current part. But still, Dikiyoba is correct about turning them into just one post instead of multiple. --------- Oh and about MMXPERT's forum game, I didn't notice that you could get faster post counts. I will visit that game after doing the tedious tasks... --------- Posts..., Nightwatcher Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted May 29, 2012 Author Share Posted May 29, 2012 Originally Posted By: Dikiyoba Upon Mars, when you are making multiple updates/releases close together (as in, less than several hours apart), please put them all in one post instead of making multiple posts in a row. That's standard netiquette for these forums. Thanks. I shall. Posts will be added a week apart or after a comment. Thank you for the information Dikiyoba. Was it indicated in the general forum rules? Originally Posted By: !TrEnToN ThE StAlLiOn *snorts* I am jealous. This is getting you so many posts. I mean, your actually posting after yourself everytime, and no one tells you off xD If I could do this, that would be gold. Well you can always read the story and make constructive comments and suggest this or that modification or submit a basic idea for an other fragment. It would make me very happy if someone gave some advice, and at least I'd get some feedback... and it would prevent me from double posting as often as I do. Also I don't consider posting as a way to establish competition despite the forum having a top Poster section. Originally Posted By: Rehctawthgin Well yeah, of course, stories are seriously hard to make. Like thinking everytime what to add and predict the next part with the relation to the current part. Well that's the main difficulty with these fragments; they are linked by an overall coherence (chapters) but they are quite "quantic" in my approach to this fanfiction: We've got a fragmentary chronology going towards the inevitable (yes quantic fields also have a sense of non permanence), with events and characters set a field of possibilities (Andras having used or not the Geneforge, Heustess may have left for the mainland or may have been killed by Andras.), an outline that is tragic, with the return and restitution to the same order which allowed the horrors of the Geneforge to happen "tel quel" hence why the narrator sounds so pessimistic and absolutely no values above absolute certainties (which is a dangerous logic). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnificent Ornk Dikiyoba Posted May 29, 2012 Share Posted May 29, 2012 Originally Posted By: Upon Mars Thank you for the information Dikiyoba. Was it indicated in the general forum rules? In the Code of Conduct, you mean? Not specifically. But avoiding needless double posting helps keep the boards clean and easy to read. It's mostly a politeness thing. No one wants to read two posts (with the attached profile information and signature) when they could read one. Dikiyoba. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted May 29, 2012 Author Share Posted May 29, 2012 Thanks! By the way the Road has been again modified and has been completed: http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/show/15563630-the-road A new fragment is being created; The sealed labs can be found here: http://geneforgeremaker.webs.com/apps/blog/entries/show/15743061-the-sealed-lab And this chapter starts with a reference to one of the songs of the band known as Korn . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted June 6, 2012 Author Share Posted June 6, 2012 Originally Posted By: Death Knight Hey upon mars, you definitely spent a lot of time writing that story. You should post it here Fanfiction G Forge where a lot of other people post fanfiction for Geneforge series. The stone and the Hammer can be found here at:http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8221284/1/The_stone_and_the_hammer The Sentinels has been updated. Look out for a new image:http://www.freewebs.com/geneforgeremaker/apps/blog/show/13105071-the-sentinelsThe journey, Masha and a another slip to the quiet marshes has been updatedhttp://www.freewebs.com/geneforgeremaker...he-drayk-s-valehttp://www.freewebs.com/geneforgeremaker/apps/blog/show/12891748-mashahttp://www.freewebs.com/geneforgeremaker/apps/blog/show/12872271-an-other-trip-to-the-quiet-marshes The Mixing Halls are complete (although they might get an update from time to time):http://www.freewebs.com/geneforgeremaker/apps/blog/show/13105131-the-mixing-halls Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted June 15, 2012 Author Share Posted June 15, 2012 Goettsch and Masha have been updated: http://www.freewebs.com/geneforgeremaker/apps/blog/show/14768212-goettsch http://www.freewebs.com/geneforgeremaker/apps/blog/show/12891748-masha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted July 23, 2012 Author Share Posted July 23, 2012 The eagle part 2 has been updated: http://www.freewebs.com/geneforgeremaker/apps/blog/show/14771751-the-eagle-part-2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Little Fyora Posted July 24, 2012 Share Posted July 24, 2012 Will you be publishing this as a novel? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted July 24, 2012 Author Share Posted July 24, 2012 I think so, but not before a good solid rewriting, spell check and authorisation from spiderweb software itself, after all it's based on their material. Also the fragments format makes me able to withhold from publishing all chapters on the net, and get a solid review before publishing (It's going to be a lot of work before I can get to what I really want), which permits me certain liberties, and a way to surprise readers... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted August 5, 2012 Author Share Posted August 5, 2012 Diarazad and South workshop are now complete: http://www.freewebs.com/geneforgeremaker/apps/blog/entries/show/17895461-diarazad http://www.freewebs.com/geneforgeremaker/apps/blog/show/17947144-south-workshop Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted September 26, 2012 Author Share Posted September 26, 2012 Even if the threads and forums are temporarily closing I have not finished toiling: http://www.freewebs.com/geneforgeremaker/ The inner crypt is being made here: http://www.freewebs.com/geneforgeremaker/apps/blog/show/19112229-among-the-dead Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted October 1, 2012 Author Share Posted October 1, 2012 Thorny fern is being remade and thorny woods is being made with an illustration: http://www.freewebs.com/geneforgeremaker/apps/blog/ The spirited city has been made anew. http://www.freewebs.com/geneforgeremaker/apps/blog/show/13105051-the-spirited-city Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted October 21, 2012 Author Share Posted October 21, 2012 Thorny wood http://www.freewebs.com/geneforgeremaker/apps/blog/show/19169553-thorny-woods is still being remade and a few updates have been made to the site. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk The Reincarnated Baron von Steuben Posted October 22, 2012 Share Posted October 22, 2012 Everything looks really cool and organized... keep up the good work! Upon Mars. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted October 28, 2012 Author Share Posted October 28, 2012 Well, I believe that things are getting more and more thorough, I even plan doing more illustrations for the story. Gottesch has been updated, and most of the spelling is being currently checked. I also plan to finish Thorny wood by the morrow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted October 28, 2012 Author Share Posted October 28, 2012 Well I haven´t finished thorny woods, but you'll get a dawring by tomorrow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Mosquito---Slayer Posted October 28, 2012 Share Posted October 28, 2012 I just checked it(only thorny woods) for the first time and I think what you are doing is pretty cool, but if you don't mind I will like to see a bit more of your personal touch in the dialogues, quoting them as it is from the game makes them appear sort of artificial. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted October 28, 2012 Author Share Posted October 28, 2012 I don´t mind it at all really, I´ll be more than willing. Also if you're looking for "personnal dialogue" look up kazg part I and II, the mixing halls and Masha; they all follow one an other, and most of the dialogue is mine; you can find them by browsing the category page. Also the overal foundations of the beginning of the book have been placed so watch out for some really though and extensive re-writing: Sucia isle being more of a mystery place, new dialogue etc... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Mosquito---Slayer Posted October 29, 2012 Share Posted October 29, 2012 I tried Kazg and yeah it was awesome, keep up the good work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted October 29, 2012 Author Share Posted October 29, 2012 Glad you like it. Did you read part one and two? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk The Reincarnated Baron von Steuben Posted October 29, 2012 Share Posted October 29, 2012 Did you draw that servile in Thorny Woods? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Mosquito---Slayer Posted October 29, 2012 Share Posted October 29, 2012 Yes both of them, I will try mixing halls and Masha a little later when I have time, I think there are still a few small grammatical errors so you might need to go through it once more, I like that you have added those poems , it's a sort of different Idea that i never thought of for a shaper but it works pretty well, one thing that might need a change is that cobra reference, because you are seeing the world from the eyes of a shaper and there has never been a mention of "our world animals" in Geneforge ,ditto for the rhino one, but then again it's your story so it's probably your choice. Also why is Kazg ll on top of Kazg l ?, that sort of left me confused. Edit:-whoops, I just found that the account is from a learned magician, the comment still stands though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted October 29, 2012 Author Share Posted October 29, 2012 Did you draw that servile in Thorny Woods? . Yes I did. Would you like some more? A new one can be found here: http://www.freewebs....e-spirited-city Yes both of them, I will try mixing halls and Masha a little later when I have time, I think there are still a few small grammatical errors so you might need to go through it once more, I like that you have added those poems , it's a sort of different Idea that i never thought of for a shaper but it works pretty well, one thing that might need a change is that cobra reference, because you are seeing the world from the eyes of a shaper and there has never been a mention of "our world animals" in Geneforge ,ditto for the rhino one, but then again it's your story so it's probably your choice. Also why is Kazg ll on top of Kazg l ?, that sort of left me confused. Edit:-whoops, I just found that the account is from a learned magician, the comment still stands though. Please correct me or point out my grammatical errors, It helps really. As for the poems; I felt that although Geneforge 1 and at the beginning of G2 was hinting at a brave new world, like the Gilgamesh epic or the odyssey, it succeded to deliver us just that, whereas here I intend to go much deeper, explain the rascit attitude the Shapers have against outsiders (the shaper In g1 is disgusted by Masha's and the two Sholai scouts' physical appearance.) or show how the promise of a society based on equality, merit and democracy stays in fact very much racist, sexist and unequal. Also, concerning the rhino, there are refrences in GI to real world animals: save for humans, sheep in the greater Temple, dogs in spiral borrows and "natural forms" such as birds in Ellrah´s keep are examples of real life animals in the Geneforge universe. I only choose not to mention some of them, like dogs for example because creations are a flexible metaphor, for slaves in general, like let's say domesticated animals. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Triumph Posted October 29, 2012 Share Posted October 29, 2012 Don't forget the rats. One of the first zones in G2 talks about them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Mosquito---Slayer Posted October 29, 2012 Share Posted October 29, 2012 .Also, concerning the rhino, there are refrences in GI to real world animals: save for humans, sheep in the greater Temple, dogs in spiral borrows and "natural forms" such as birds in Ellrah´s keep are examples of real life animals in the Geneforge universe. I only choose not to mention some of them, like dogs for example because creations in part in this story, are a metaphor for domesticated animals. Yep, now I remember, i guess i was a bit mistaken with that one, the cause of confusion being you using names of dangerous animals, so I got a bit mistaken. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted October 30, 2012 Author Share Posted October 30, 2012 Yep, now I remember, i guess i was a bit mistaken with that one, the cause of confusion being you using names of dangerous animals, so I got a bit mistaken. No harm done. Also I've corrected some of kazg. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk The Reincarnated Baron von Steuben Posted October 30, 2012 Share Posted October 30, 2012 First encounter is with rats. Says that sometimes experiments fail or something like that. Your usually Spidweb text ambiance. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted October 31, 2012 Author Share Posted October 31, 2012 More pictures like this one to come: The Reincarnated Baron von Steuben 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk The Reincarnated Baron von Steuben Posted November 2, 2012 Share Posted November 2, 2012 What's the scene supposed to be of? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt Upon Mars. Posted November 2, 2012 Author Share Posted November 2, 2012 The one in the greater temple: where you find the priest shade. Here's an picture from the game: http://www.freewebs.com/geneforgeremaker/apps/photos/photo?photoid=162123094 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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