Goldengirl

I like the story, but I think it needs more battle stuff.Also you didnt put in the strange roamer.Not to mention you are assuming we are pro servile

I think that we should be able to be serviles. I would also like to be able to have packmules like ornks, roamers, etc. Of cours more creations and spells. One spell I definetly would like to see is a spell that allows me to completly mind control a creation. A wand that could do that would also be great.

I think that there is a portal behind the door. a portal that is so powerful that when shaped. It had to be shaped.Its power is to bring back the dead.Thats all you should need to know