I found 2 typos.
Special Encounter, Goblin Mine
In a dialog text about an ambush by Lord Trinket when using the southern platform.
Quote:
Many of them fall short, falling hilariously into the dark depths below. A surprising number, of them, however, make the leap.
No need to put a comma here.
Quote:
Many of them fall short, falling hilariously into the dark depths below. A surprising number of them, however, make the leap.
Lark, The Castle
In a dialog text, the first conversation.
Quote:
"She looks up at you. Welcome ..." She looks at the insignia on your shoulder.
Opening double quotation should be here.
Quote:
She looks up at you. "Welcome ..." She looks at the insignia on your shoulder.
Ver. 1.0 Macintosh