Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 14, 2011 Share Posted November 14, 2011 I am going to create a Fan Fiction. I was just wondering if anyone wanted to be in it. I will post the Fan Fiction here when I finish it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hatchling Cockatrice Alorael at Large Posted November 15, 2011 Share Posted November 15, 2011 Is this fiction about the fans, or fiction about the games in which fans get cameo roles? —Alorael, who demands royalties for all use of his likeness. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 15, 2011 Author Share Posted November 15, 2011 It is like the games where you get a role. Also, I was wondering about the firebolts and burning kyshakks. Do they dissolve over a period of time and what exactly does unstable mean? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted November 15, 2011 Share Posted November 15, 2011 Unstable means they Lose health over time in exchange for being SUPER CRAZY FREAKING POWERFUL! Anywho... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 15, 2011 Author Share Posted November 15, 2011 ok, thanks for the answer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted November 16, 2011 Share Posted November 16, 2011 You are welcome. And the Burning Kyshakk and firebolt? I never found the canisters for Kyshakk and Wingbolts yet so I don't know, but I would say it is a pretty safe bet that they lose health and dissolve. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 17, 2011 Author Share Posted November 17, 2011 Do you want a drakon named after you to be in the story? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt MMXPERT-seraph of thermodynamics Posted November 17, 2011 Share Posted November 17, 2011 I'd prefer an eyebeast. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted November 17, 2011 Share Posted November 17, 2011 Why not >.> as long as I get a copy and am able to read it. I shall be Trenton, the drakon lord! Thats right, I wanna be the drakon lord Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 17, 2011 Author Share Posted November 17, 2011 I will make you the drakon lord that kills the eye beast. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted November 18, 2011 Share Posted November 18, 2011 Hows the story coming along? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 18, 2011 Author Share Posted November 18, 2011 I am working on it. I have been busy this week, so it is slow moving right now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted November 19, 2011 Share Posted November 19, 2011 Where are you going to post it? Im thinking you should make an account on Fanfiction.net and post it there like Zizak-tel once did with three great fanfictions on the avernum series. If you want to see what I mean you can read them here http://www.fanfiction.net/u/360120/ Anywho, Im sure everyone would love it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 19, 2011 Author Share Posted November 19, 2011 I will post it in this thread so it will be easily accessible. I will hopefully be able to release the first chapter soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Articulate Vlish Lord_Shaper Posted November 20, 2011 Share Posted November 20, 2011 Will it be pro shaper, or pro rebel? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted November 20, 2011 Share Posted November 20, 2011 Or pro trakovite, or pro-Fence sitting? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 20, 2011 Author Share Posted November 20, 2011 @Lord_Shaper you will be a trakovite soldier that kills the serviles. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unflappable Drayk Death Knight Posted November 21, 2011 Share Posted November 21, 2011 Heh, this sounds cool. Will this be a serious story or comic/serious? Im only asking because I really got into a webcomic by the name of "Dungeon Crawlers". The comic was comedy and stupid but still it was funny to me because im a d and d nerd. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 22, 2011 Author Share Posted November 22, 2011 It will be a story because I am not that good at comic art. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hatchling Cockatrice Lilith Posted November 22, 2011 Share Posted November 22, 2011 Originally Posted By: Pyrrhus It will be a story because I am not that good at comic art. Comic as in funny, not comic as in graphic novel. Will it be a funny story or a serious story? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 22, 2011 Author Share Posted November 22, 2011 It will be a bit of both as it will have a plot, although I may try to incorporate some humor. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt MMXPERT-seraph of thermodynamics Posted November 22, 2011 Share Posted November 22, 2011 Can I still be an Eyebeast? If so make me a trial-giver type of guy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unflappable Drayk Death Knight Posted November 22, 2011 Share Posted November 22, 2011 You dont have to make a character of everyone but if you do make one for me, i dont care what i am, so long as my character is someone elusive Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 22, 2011 Author Share Posted November 22, 2011 I might actually make the story serious I suppose there can be a gazer... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyshakk Koan Skwish-E Posted November 22, 2011 Share Posted November 22, 2011 Can you write me in as Grog the wise-cracking ogre? No Wait,... Geneforge. ... Grog the wisecracking Battle Alpha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 23, 2011 Author Share Posted November 23, 2011 @MMXPERT & Skwish-E You will be Trenton's creations. I will hopefully have the story soon because now I have more free time with Thanksgiving Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 23, 2011 Author Share Posted November 23, 2011 @Skwich-E... actually you will be pro-shaper instead of a rebel. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 23, 2011 Author Share Posted November 23, 2011 Ok here it is... It will do no good to read the end. (this isn't the entire first chapter.) Prologue: I went to the shaper testing grounds in the White Spire Mountains and succeed. At age 13 I am probably one of the youngest graduates. I learned a lot and started heading to The Storm Plains, which was the region I was assigned to. Chapter 1: In the Mera Tev I sat in a cart pulled by a Kyshaak. In front of me were two outsider soldiers. One of them, a woman dressed in purple drove the cart with a venom baton across her lap. The other one, which was a Minhala guardsman, sat with a sword at his belt and a bundle of javelins to his side. At my feet in a basket was my wingbolt named Fiontan. Next to me sat Guardian Hawthorn with the assignment to escort me safely to the storm plains. It was a humid miserable day, so none of us felt in the mood to talk. The leaves in a tree rustled violently and profane language was clearly heard. The Minhala Guard threw a Javelin in the general vicinity. This was followed by more cussing. Hawthorn face-palmed, “I don’t know how the rebels managed to get so far in this war with all of these military errors. I suppose we should prepare to slaughter some serviles.” I stroked the back of Fiontan’s neck, waking him up. I whispered into his ear. “Go scout around for the enemy number. However, if we are under attack then come back immediately. He flew off to carry out my instructions. Hawthorn had created three battle alpha to assist him. One of them was very insolent looking. It was clear that he would eventually need a visit to the foundry. Hawthorn said gruffly, “create some burning kyshaak to surround the cart to support the soldiers for the battle.”…. Did you expect a battle? What you honestly did? I am going to torture you and not release the remainder of the first chapter (including the battle) until you trollolol this thread. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted November 23, 2011 Share Posted November 23, 2011 Pretty nice I should say. However something bothers me, what is the PC? Did he/she use the geneforge or canisters? What Shaper faction did he join, Rawal, Alwan, Or taygen? Other than that I like it. I like it alot. And if you don't keep writing so god help me I will get down on ny hands and knees to cry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 23, 2011 Author Share Posted November 23, 2011 The PC is a young graduate shaper based off of my forum character. Due to the war they started training the young shapers faster and giving them more education on the powerful creations. I won't say which faction he will join because it may ruin the plot. The first chapter is called the reverse ambush. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted November 23, 2011 Share Posted November 23, 2011 Pretty nice. Im trollololing this thread or whatever the hell you said. Great, wow, you got me in rhymes now. NOW FINISH THE FIRST CHAPTER YOU FAT COW *Was just kidding and needed something else that rhymed with wow* But you have me in susspence already. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 23, 2011 Author Share Posted November 23, 2011 I should put an Ornk in there named fat cow.... I am going to H-E-B, but when I get back I will try and work on it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted November 23, 2011 Share Posted November 23, 2011 Geneforge characters have no Idea what cows are. Ornks are the cows. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 23, 2011 Author Share Posted November 23, 2011 I sometimes wonder where all of the natural creatures (besides rats) went in Geneforge. I know in G2 when you enter Sharon's grove it says that there are creatures peering out at you, but that is about it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted November 24, 2011 Share Posted November 24, 2011 Damn, I can't think of a single other natural creature. EDIT: do clawbugs count? they look like scorpions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 24, 2011 Author Share Posted November 24, 2011 They are shaped though. I guess the people count also. Some of the trees and grass might count also. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted November 24, 2011 Share Posted November 24, 2011 Most plants are also shaped in desert like places like the storm plains. Anywho, I never seen anything mentioning natural desastors in the earlier games, however, did anyone see the "Although the storm plains are ravaged by yearly tornadoes" apon entering? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 24, 2011 Author Share Posted November 24, 2011 I suppose that is how it got its name. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted November 24, 2011 Share Posted November 24, 2011 It says thats only half the reason. The other reason is that it is ravaged by war. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ineffable Wingbolt MMXPERT-seraph of thermodynamics Posted November 25, 2011 Share Posted November 25, 2011 how's it going? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted November 25, 2011 Share Posted November 25, 2011 Umm...How about we do that in Private messages please instead of the forums. On that note I am fine. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 25, 2011 Author Share Posted November 25, 2011 I am good. Do you still want to be a drakon? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted November 26, 2011 Share Posted November 26, 2011 Yes yes, go ahead with that. I change around from shaper, to guardian, to drakon, to all sorts of creations every once in a while. Ill be a drakon soon enough. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 26, 2011 Author Share Posted November 26, 2011 ok. You will stay a drakon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted November 26, 2011 Author Share Posted November 26, 2011 I have the entire first chapter. Here it is Prologue: I went to the shaper testing grounds in the White Spire Mountains and succeed. At age 13 I am probably one of the youngest graduates. I learned a lot and started heading to The Storm Plains, which was the region I was assigned to. Chapter 1: In the Mera Tev I sat in a cart pulled by a Kyshaak. In front of me were two outsider soldiers. One of them, a woman dressed in purple drove the cart with a venom baton across her lap. The other one, which was a Minhala guardsman, sat with a sword at his belt and a bundle of javelins to his side. At my feet in a basket was my wingbolt named Fiontan. Next to me sat Guardian Hawthorn with the assignment to escort me safely to the storm plains. It was a humid miserable day, so none of us felt in the mood to talk. The leaves in a tree rustled violently and profane language was clearly heard. The Minhala Guard threw a Javelin in the general vicinity. This was followed by more cussing. Hawthorn face-palmed, “I don’t know how the rebels managed to get so far in this war with all of these military errors. I suppose we should prepare to slaughter some serviles.” I stroked the back of Fiontan’s neck, waking him up. I whispered into his ear. “Go scout around for the enemy number. However, if we are under attack then come back immediately. He flew off to carry out my instructions. Hawthorn had created three battle alpha to assist him. One of them was very insolent looking. It was clear that he would eventually need a visit to the foundry. Hawthorn said gruffly, “Create some burning kyshaak to surround the cart to support the soldiers for the battle.” I created them. My Kyshaaks breathed fire at the surrounding trees. Yelps and shouts of pain could be heard from the wannabe ambushers. A group of burning serviles ran out of the trees and fell dead on the path in front of the wagon. “Pleasant,” Hawthorn said dryly. A javelin hit our driver in the head; killing her instantly. A wall of shield-bearing human soldiers walked out of the trees. They blocked the beams of flame from the burning kyshaaks with their shields and continued their advance. I pulled out my fiery double edged rapier named Burn of the Scorch and charged their shield wall. Hawthorn and his battle alpha did the same. Our guard chunked javelins at the soldiers, which distracted them enough for the battle alpha to sneak behind them. They brought their fists on the rebels’ heads; cracking their skulls and killing them instantly. “Hahahaha stupid rebels,” the insolent looking one laughed. Hawthorn looked at me disappointedly, “Unfortunately we didn’t get to chop up anything. Lets continue to the town Alorense.” At that moment Fiontan flew into view. He was dogfighting a drayk that must have been leading the band of rebels. He shot a white ball of flame out of his tail and burnt off the drayk’s wing. It crashed into the ground and landed in a grotesque heap of blood and gore. It was dead. Fiontan landed back in his basket on the cart like nothing had happened. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted December 3, 2011 Share Posted December 3, 2011 Not to be pushy or anything, but will you be posting another chapter soon? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted December 3, 2011 Author Share Posted December 3, 2011 I havn't started the next chapter because I thought no one was reading this one. My apologies if I was mistaken. I will try and start the next chapter soon although it may take a while. I have been very busy with school work recently. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyshakk Koan Skwish-E Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 Ha Ha Ha, Stupid rebels! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Easygoing Eyebeast Trenton. Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 Wingbolt/Firebolt/Modified other elements spit fire out of theyre mouth. I think the tail is used for balance, or for stinging. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrulous Glaahk Pyrrhus Posted December 5, 2011 Author Share Posted December 5, 2011 ooohhhh I never knew that. I will try and fix it. I'm busy this week because my Mom had to get surgery, so i have to help my sister, aunt, and dad take care of her. I cant work on the story this week because of that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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