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Author: Lazarus






Composite Score: 2.0/5.0


Best: 0.00% (0/1)

Good: 0.00% (0/1)

Average: 0.00% (0/1)

Substandard: 100.00% (1/1)

Poor: 0.00% (0/1)






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  • 6 months later...

Well, truthfully, it is a good beginning. Unfortunately, me being on a Mac, I got an error thrown at me early on. (If the designer contacts me about it, my score may change, for what it matters.)


I dunno. The ending I got was just WAY too abrupt. Things felt like they could have been interesting: Political intrigue, mystical stuff, magic, excitement. And, I may well be missing more of the prologue beyond my error. For now, it gets [rating]Substandard[/rating], though it'll undoubtedly get to Average or higher if the bugs get fixed.

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