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Pyrrhus

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  1. The PC is a young graduate shaper based off of my forum character. Due to the war they started training the young shapers faster and giving them more education on the powerful creations. I won't say which faction he will join because it may ruin the plot.

     

     

    The first chapter is called the reverse ambush.

  2. Ok here it is... It will do no good to read the end. (this isn't the entire first chapter.)

     

     

    Prologue: I went to the shaper testing grounds in the White Spire Mountains and succeed. At age 13 I am probably one of the youngest graduates. I learned a lot and started heading to The Storm Plains, which was the region I was assigned to.

     

    Chapter 1: In the Mera Tev

    I sat in a cart pulled by a Kyshaak. In front of me were two outsider soldiers. One of them, a woman dressed in purple drove the cart with a venom baton across her lap. The other one, which was a Minhala guardsman, sat with a sword at his belt and a bundle of javelins to his side. At my feet in a basket was my wingbolt named Fiontan. Next to me sat Guardian Hawthorn with the assignment to escort me safely to the storm plains. It was a humid miserable day, so none of us felt in the mood to talk.

    The leaves in a tree rustled violently and profane language was clearly heard. The Minhala Guard threw a Javelin in the general vicinity. This was followed by more cussing. Hawthorn face-palmed, “I don’t know how the rebels managed to get so far in this war with all of these military errors. I suppose we should prepare to slaughter some serviles.” I stroked the back of Fiontan’s neck, waking him up. I whispered into his ear. “Go scout around for the enemy number. However, if we are under attack then come back immediately. He flew off to carry out my instructions.

    Hawthorn had created three battle alpha to assist him. One of them was very insolent looking. It was clear that he would eventually need a visit to the foundry. Hawthorn said gruffly, “create some burning kyshaak to surround the cart to support the soldiers for the battle.”….

     

    Did you expect a battle? What you honestly did? I am going to torture you and not release the remainder of the first chapter (including the battle) until you trollolol this thread.

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