Some tiny grammar mistakes but otherwise perfect, this story is awesome. I like how as the story progresses so do the creations. A few things in the post you might want to change, if it is okay with you, is that you could call the armor store an armory, also write Saraph instead of seraph in the 6th paragraph, capitalize the shop name golden stitches (great idea making a tailors shop). Besides those this story is great. I can't wait for more!
P.S How come Shaper Andras summoned roamers on the way to the citadel instead of kyshakks or wingbolts?