Posted 08 August 2011 - 07:26 AM
Muffins 'n Hell
From TGM on SV:
(I'll start from 6.0, my score for the rageously mediocre scenarios, and will add to or substract from that as I go.)
-2.0 for the, I'm afraid, absolutely horrible town/area design. Might seem harsh, but things like this are what I, personally, notice first in scenarios. The outdoors were partially unfinished (I managed to somehow place myself OUTSIDE of the walled cave area.), and the town areas felt unfinished, and hastily drawn.
-0.2 for the small amount of dialogue. And the amount of typo sand grammericalistic errors present still the scenario in.
-0.5 for the, at it's best, incoherent story.
+0.5 for the, at it's best, incoherent story. Some of the stuff was so absurd it was actually funny, and thus, I feel, contributed to the theme of the scenario well.
+0.2 for this being the designer's first scenario. While the critique you're getting now might feel harsh, keep on designing. I mean, you have actually designed and released a scenario, a feat not many can currently boast with. Thumbs up for that, Muffmeister.