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BainIhrno BainIhrno

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Posted 16 January 2011 - 04:14 PM #1 Threnody


Author: Lazarus

Composite Score: 2.0/5.0

Best: 0.00% (0/1)
Good: 0.00% (0/1)
Average: 0.00% (0/1)
Substandard: 100.00% (1/1)
Poor: 0.00% (0/1)


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Posted 31 July 2011 - 05:51 PM #2 Threnody

Well, truthfully, it is a good beginning. Unfortunately, me being on a Mac, I got an error thrown at me early on. (If the designer contacts me about it, my score may change, for what it matters.)

I dunno. The ending I got was just WAY too abrupt. Things felt like they could have been interesting: Political intrigue, mystical stuff, magic, excitement. And, I may well be missing more of the prologue beyond my error. For now, it gets Substandard, though it'll undoubtedly get to Average or higher if the bugs get fixed.

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