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Maybe by adding a little pressure on myself I can force myself to actually work on this thing. Anyway, Home Again was supposed to be my entry for the 24h-contest held... um, a year ago? In all honesty, I still don't think I've spent more than 24 hours total working on it, but the idea has evolved a bit from what it initially was.

 

Anywho, it is still a short scenario with one outdoor section, one friendly town and one two-part dungeon. I'm not going to say anything about the plot, unless someone is actually interested to know what it's about. However, here are some screenshots:

 

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My question is this: does this look okay? Both of the screenies, do they look stupid? The color palette in the first and perspective in the fallen pillar in the other.Hscreen1.jpg

 

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The first shot looks great. The second one looks fine too, but moving the base of the pillar back a bit might make it look more stable (unless you want to give the impression that the pillar might fall into the chasm at any moment).

 

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the falled pillar
I think the word you're looking for is 'fallen' ('felled' would work as well). English is fun, isn't it?
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Originally Posted By: Dintiradan
The first shot looks great. The second one looks fine too, but moving the base of the pillar back a bit might make it look more stable (unless you want to give the impression that the pillar might fall into the chasm at any moment).

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the falled pillar
I think the word you're looking for is 'fallen' ('felled' would work as well). English is fun, isn't it?

I believe that falléd would work as well, but that's muchmuchmuch more archaic.
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the falled pillar


That's a typo. I was going for "fallen." Although, maybe it could have been "felled" since E is so much closer to A than D is to N on my keyboard. Maybe I decided to change it halfway through typing and ended up with "falled."
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Originally Posted By: Smoo
Maybe by adding a little pressure on myself I can force myself to actually work on this thing.

Welp. That didn't work. It really wasn't an unrealistic supposition to think that I might be able to finish this thing before I go on a trip for two weeks. I guess I'll just have to continue not getting anything done once I get back. Work takes too much out of me, I suppose.

Also, the typos distracted me from this before:

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unless you want to give the impression that the pillar might fall into the chasm at any moment)

Why would I want to give that impression? Shut up!
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